Forum TrotiRider

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Bonjours , Ma prof d'anglais ma demandé De faire un Club de trot' et de le presenter a la classe ( Je suis en 3 eme ) Donc j'aimerais vos avis sur mon texte =)

English Homework

Hello everyone,
Welcome to my club where you learn to do the scooter freestyle
 
introduction:
Scooter freestyle : What is it ?

first in freestyle scooter, you learn to do figures of any kind: It may be in a skate park or even on the street
to start in the freestyle scooter must first have an adapted a scooter ( photo) if the scooter is not adapted to freestyle it will break (the freestyle scooters are not foldable, they have non-adjustable handlebar: There are different size of handlebars: S, M, L, XL)


We use a scooter very high strength
Freestyle scooter is a new sport and in the same category as Skate, BMX, Roller: It belongs to the sport of skiing.
People who use freestyle scooters are known as The (troti?)Riders .

Here is a picture of a scooter freestyle mark MADD: One of the most solid scooter.
But there are many other brands



steps to learn how to ride a  scooter freestyle :

You can learn to do the scooter freestyle on Wednesday, Saturday and Sunday, to begin you do not necessarily need to have a competition or freestyle scooter.
You can also train all weekend with your friends once you have acquired the main figures
So if you want to learn the freestyle scooter contact me and I invite you to come try the sport
If you are good at it, you can go to competitions ...


Everyone can try this sport because it's not to complicated, finally beginning is the hard point _j'ai mis ca parceque pas de fin

voila j'espert t'avoir aide a ne pas avoir une trop mauvaise note, sinon ormis les fautes que j'ai corige, le texte est bien!
et je n'ai pas touche au contenu, juste a la formulation des phrases.

Dernière modification par Deyo (05/10/11 à 15:43)

OK Merci =)